Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the issue and requests assistance, demonstrating a clear intent. However, it suffers from grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, which detracts from overall clarity and professionalism.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Clear description of the problem — “However, it began showing some issues after.”
- Attempt to resolve the issue — “I have tried to restart it and checked on the internet to get a solution.”
To improve
- Lack of specificity in problem description Try: Specify the exact error messages or issues encountered, such as 'the printer displayed an error code E05 and refused to connect to any device.'
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