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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the intent to adopt a dog and reassures the landlord about cleanliness. However, it suffers from grammatical errors and lacks depth in elaboration, which limits its overall effectiveness.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Commitment to cleanliness — “I would like to assure you that I will maintain the apartment clean and organized as it was.”
- Clear request for information — “Could you also kindly tell me if there any specific requirements or additional fees I should make for having a pet, so I could prepare myself accordingly.”
To improve
- Lack of elaboration Try: since I have been living alone for a long time and believe a dog would provide companionship and improve my well-being.
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