Write an Email — scored sample answer
You are a junior at Riverdale University majoring in Environmental…
3.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively addresses the main points but suffers from grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that hinder clarity. Improving sentence structure and correcting errors would enhance the overall effectiveness of the communication.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
18 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear expression of interest — “I am very eager to apply for your summer 2024 internship program.”
- Acknowledgment of prior interaction — “I recently met you on career fair as junior student at Riverdale University.”
To improve
- Lack of specificity in request Try: Could you please provide details on the specific project proposal required for the application?
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