4.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email is well-structured and addresses all necessary points, maintaining a polite tone throughout. However, it could benefit from more varied vocabulary and complex sentence structures to enhance clarity and sophistication.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
24 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
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