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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates interest in the position and provides relevant personal insights. However, grammatical errors and a lack of varied sentence structures detract from the overall quality.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Expresses interest in the position — “I want show my interest in the position.”
- Describes relevant skills — “I am passionate about literature and novels, I love reading and talk to people, I have a good knowledge in terms of authors”
To improve
- Lack of syntactic variety Try: Although I lack extensive work experience, I am eager to develop it.
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