3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively addresses the necessary points and maintains a polite tone, which is a strength. However, frequent grammatical errors and limited syntactic variety hinder clarity and overall effectiveness.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
22 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear Purpose — “I am writing to ask bout lease contract.”
- Direct Requests — “I would greatly appreciate it if you provide information about the process for returning the apartment keys.”
To improve
- Date Format Error Try: June 30th
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