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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively addresses the catering requirements but suffers from grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Improving sentence structure and vocabulary precision would enhance clarity and professionalism.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Clear Purpose — “I am writing to get information on your catering services for my function.”
- Addresses Requirements — “Firstly, I would like to know various menu options that comes under the budget of $500”
- Call to Action — “I would appreciate if you could provide assistance.”
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