Write an Email — scored sample answer
You recently interviewed for the position of Marketing Intern at…
2.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email covers all necessary points but is hindered by several language errors and awkward phrasing. The vocabulary and sentence structures are basic, which limits the overall effectiveness of the communication. Focus on improving language accuracy and syntactic variety to enhance clarity and professionalism.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
15 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3/5Breakdown
Working well
- Expresses gratitude — “I really appreciate and am grateful for the opportunity to interview with you”
- Mentions relevant project — “I completed a Marketing 301 project focused on developing sustainable marketing strategies”
- Expresses interest in the position — “I would appreciate it if you could allow me to join your marketing team”
To improve
- Incorrect name usage Try: you, Ms. Thompson
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