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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the necessary information and maintains a polite tone. However, it suffers from grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structure, which detracts from its overall effectiveness.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Clear purpose — “I am writing to get information on the pricing of green haven conference center”
- Expresses urgency — “I would like to know this earlier so that I could take necessary steps”
To improve
- Lack of elaboration Try: Could you please provide details on the catering services available at the hall, including menu options and pricing?
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