Write an Email — scored sample answer
You are planning a team-building event for your university's…
3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively communicates the necessary information and maintains a polite tone. However, it suffers from grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structure, which detracts from its overall effectiveness.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear purpose — “I am writing to get information on the pricing of green haven conference center”
- Expresses urgency — “I would like to know this earlier so that I could take necessary steps”
To improve
- Lack of elaboration Try: Could you please provide details on the catering services available at the hall, including menu options and pricing?
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