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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the issue and suggests a solution, showing an understanding of the task. However, it suffers from some grammatical errors and a lack of specific details, which affects clarity and overall effectiveness.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Clear introduction — “My name is Hugo, and I am your neighbor.”
- Acknowledgement of neighbor's situation — “I understand that you are on vacation from your company, and you wanted to celebrate.”
To improve
- Vague impact description Try: Provide a more specific description of how the music affects your job, such as 'the loud music disrupts my online classes and makes it difficult for my students to focus.'
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