3.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email fulfills the task requirements but lacks depth in elaboration and contains some language inaccuracies. The greeting is inappropriate, which affects the social conventions score. Improving specificity and correcting errors would enhance the response.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
18 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3/5Breakdown
Working well
- Expresses appreciation — “I am writing to express my appreciation for the workshop.”
- Mentions a specific topic — “the topic about how to use state-of-the-art technology is really useful for me”
- Requests additional resources — “I would like to request further reading materials and resources”
To improve
- Vague expression of appreciation Try: The workshop provided valuable insights that have enhanced my digital marketing skills, particularly in using advanced technology.
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