4.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email is well-structured and addresses all necessary points with clarity. It uses appropriate social conventions and maintains a polite tone throughout. While the language is mostly accurate, the vocabulary and syntax could be more varied and sophisticated to achieve a higher score.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
24 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
4/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear identification and reference — “My name is [Your Full Name], and I recently applied for the merit-based scholarship offered by your foundation.”
- Expression of interest — “I remain strongly interested in this scholarship, as it would greatly support my academic goals and allow me to focus more fully on my studies.”
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