3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively addresses all the necessary points with appropriate social conventions. However, it lacks detailed elaboration and syntactic variety, which limits the overall effectiveness. Improving these areas could enhance clarity and engagement.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear request for confirmation
- Expresses gratitude — “Thank you for your time and consideration.”
To improve
- Vague refund inquiry Try: I would like to inquire about any potential refund for early cancellation, as I have heard from others that refunds may be available.
- Lack of specific cancellation details Try: I am writing to request confirmation of my subscription cancellation before the next billing cycle on October 1, 2023.
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