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2.5/ 5
FairMostly Unsuccessful
While the email attempts to address the task requirements, it is significantly hindered by numerous grammatical and spelling errors, as well as limited vocabulary and sentence structure. Clarity is often compromised, making the message difficult to fully understand.
16 / 30
Basic
Content
2/5Breakdown
Clear purpose2/5
Complete response2/5
Addresses requirements2/5
Working well
- Expression of Gratitude — “Thank you for you attention”
- Attempt to Address Fees — “Aldo please advice on any applicable fees that can be pay in terms of extension.”
To improve
- Missing Specific Extension Period Try: I would be grateful if you could extend my rental period for an additional two weeks, until [Specific Date, e.g., October 25th].
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