Write an Email — scored sample answer
You borrowed a rare book from your university library for a research…
2.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
While the email attempts to address the task requirements, it is significantly hindered by numerous grammatical and spelling errors, as well as limited vocabulary and sentence structure. Clarity is often compromised, making the message difficult to fully understand.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
15 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
2/5Breakdown
Working well
- Expression of Gratitude — “Thank you for you attention”
- Attempt to Address Fees
To improve
- Missing Specific Extension Period Try: I would be grateful if you could extend my rental period for an additional two weeks, until [Specific Date, e.g., October 25th].
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