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GoodPartially Successful

3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric

The email effectively communicates the issue and request, demonstrating an understanding of the task. However, it suffers from grammatical errors and lacks the sophistication in vocabulary and sentence structure needed for a higher score.

Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate

22 / 30

legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale

Content

3.5/5

Breakdown

Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5

Working well

  • Clear explanation of the mistake — “I discovered that I registered for the wrong course by mistake and due to an oversight.
  • Specific course intended — “I intended to enroll in the new state-of-the-art AI technology course;

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