Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
4.0/ 5
GoodGenerally Successful
The email effectively communicates the situation and requests guidance on next steps, demonstrating a clear understanding of the task. Minor language issues and a lack of sophisticated phrasing prevent it from reaching a higher score.
25 / 30
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Content
4/5Breakdown
Clear purpose4/5
Complete response4/5
Addresses requirements4/5
Working well
- Clear explanation of the situation — “While I was studying in a cafe, I accidentally spilled coffee on this book.”
- Acknowledgment of responsibility — “It was my fault, and I want to fix it.”
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