Write an Email — scored sample answer
You accidentally spilled coffee on a library book while studying at a…
4.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively communicates the situation and requests guidance on next steps, demonstrating a clear understanding of the task. Minor language issues and a lack of sophisticated phrasing prevent it from reaching a higher score.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
24 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
4/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear explanation of the situation — “While I was studying in a cafe, I accidentally spilled coffee on this book.”
- Acknowledgment of responsibility — “It was my fault, and I want to fix it.”
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