Write an Email — scored sample answer
You have a scheduled appointment with your doctor next Monday for an…
3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively communicates the need to reschedule the appointment and provides some context. However, it suffers from grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, which detracts from its overall clarity and professionalism.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear identification — “My name is [name withheld]”
- Specific request — “Would it possible to reschedule my appointment with Dr John on May 10 2026.”
To improve
- Lack of contact information Try: My contact information is [insert phone number/email].
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