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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the necessary points and maintains a polite tone. However, grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing detract from the overall clarity and professionalism.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
4/5Breakdown
Clear purpose4/5
Complete response4/5
Addresses requirements4/5
Working well
- Expresses gratitude — “I would like to thank you for receving me to your office and giving me the opportunity to become a part of your company.”
- Reiterates interest — “I would kindly like to inform you that I am still interested in the position.”
- Offers additional information — “If needed, I can provide additional information.”
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