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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the cancellation request and follows appropriate social conventions. However, the language contains noticeable errors and lacks some specificity, which limits its overall effectiveness.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Clear explanation of cancellation reason — “I am going to need to cancel it due to a new schedule in my job.”
- Request for written confirmation — “It would be appreciated if you could confirm this request in writing.”
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