Write an Email — scored sample answer
You signed up for a gym membership three months ago. Due to a change…
3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively communicates the cancellation request and follows appropriate social conventions. However, the language contains noticeable errors and lacks some specificity, which limits its overall effectiveness.
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21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear explanation of cancellation reason — “I am going to need to cancel it due to a new schedule in my job.”
- Request for written confirmation — “It would be appreciated if you could confirm this request in writing.”
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