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Band 5.04.0/5 rubricI believe that providing funding for the arts and cultural programs is more beneficial. Although some people might think that it has drawbacks, I am convinced that this approach offers numerous advantages.
To begin with, I strongly agree with Ines’s perspective that providing funding for the arts offers students far-reaching benefits. Additionally, I would like to point out that investing in artistic initiatives enhances students’ knowledge of cultural heritage, allowing them to better understand their past and present and stay engaged in learning. For instance, unlike traditional classroom learning, undergraduate students can explore cultural heritage through visual records and cultural institutions. For these reasons, allocating funds to the arts is beneficial not only for current undergraduates but also for future generations.
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