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Band 4.53.5/5 rubricI believe that universities should be required to provide free mental health services to all students. Although some people might think that it has drawbacks, I am convinced that this approach offers numerous advantages.
To begin with, I strongly agree with Aisha's perspective that a university should provide free mental health services because the transition to college can be overwhelmingly stressful for many students. For example, students who receive free counseling can manage academic stress more effectively, which allows them to concentrate better on their studies. Additionally, psychological support helps learners promote their well-being. For example, China uses this strategy to help students promote their well-being and stay engaged in academic activities. This allows them to improve their academic performance.
Taking everything into consideration, mental health issues are really significant for students, and universities should take care of them.
What worked
- Clear Position
- Engagement with Classmate's Perspective
- Use of Examples
What cost points
- Generic Examples
- Lack of Sophisticated Language