Strong response
Band 5.04.0/5 rubric- To
- presenter@digitalworkshop.com
- Subject
- Follow-up on Digital Marketing Workshop
Dear Presenter of DW
I hope this message finds you well. I recently attended your digital marketing workshop and would like to thank you for the engaging and informative session. I found the segment on search engine optimization (SEO) strategies particularly valuable, as it provided practical tips that I can apply to my current projects.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could share any additional resources, readings, or tools related to SEO that were discussed during the workshop. Access to these materials would help me deepen my understanding and implement the strategies more effectively.
Thank you very much for your time and support.
What worked
- Clear and polite opening, establishing the purpose of the email immediately.
- Specific mention of a useful topic, demonstrating engagement with the workshop content.
- Polite and clear request for additional resources.
What cost points
- The greeting is a bit informal and lacks specificity for a professional follow-up.
- The closing statement, while polite, is somewhat generic and could be more specific to the context of the request.