Strong response
Band 5.54.5/5 rubric- To
- dr.smith@renewableenergysummit.com
- Subject
- Request for data from Renewable Energy Conference
What worked
- Clear and polite introduction with relevant context
- Specific explanation of missing data and its importance
- Polite and direct request for assistance
What cost points
- Slight redundancy in polite phrasing
- Missing formal sign-off