Strong response
Band 5.04.0/5 rubric- To
- support@onlineshop.com
- Subject
- Missing Package - Order #98765
What worked
- Clear purpose
- Explanation of the situation
- Request for action
What cost points
- Grammatical error
- Lack of gratitude
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Every scored sample answer Reach120 publishes for this prompt, banded so you can see the range rather than one version of "good".
You ordered a birthday gift for your sister that was marked as delivered, but you never received the package. The delivery photo shows an unfamiliar doorstep. You need to resolve this with customer service.
Written to: customer-service
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
Across 69 scored practice attempts at the Reach120 practice prompt "Missing Package - Order #98765", the mean Reach120 practice band estimate is 4.5 of 6 (measured 2026-08-24; Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score).
Mean band estimate
4.5of 6
over 69 scored practice attempts
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
Source: Reach120 practice corpus, every scored attempt at this prompt, internal and harness-created accounts excluded through the same rule as public_measured_stats(). Attempts scored before 2026-03-23 are excluded: Reach120 changed how it scores on that date, and pooling across the change would describe the change rather than the writing. Recomputed when this page is rebuilt; the date above is when this reading was taken.
Published only at or above 30 scored attempts from at least 10 learners; below that Reach120 shows nothing here.
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