Middle response
Band 4.53.5/5 rubric- Subject
- Refund Request - Order #12345 - Family Emergency
What worked
- Polite tone
- Clear expression of regret
- Willingness to provide documentation
What cost points
- Spelling errors
- Awkward phrasing
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You purchased tickets for a concert three weeks ago. Unfortunately, you have a family emergency and cannot attend the event. The ticket website says tickets are non-refundable, but you want to request an exception given your circumstances.
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