Strong response
Band 5.04.0/5 rubric- To
- support@booknookstore.com
- Subject
- Delayed Shipment Inquiry
What worked
- Clear purpose and context
- Polite tone
- Call to action
What cost points
- Lack of elaboration
- Limited vocabulary
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You ordered a set of textbooks titled 'Advanced Business Communication' from BookNook Online Store for your upcoming business communication course. The order was placed on September 20th, and you were informed that the shipment would arrive by September 30th. However, it is now October 10th, and the textbooks have not yet arrived. You need these books urgently as your course begins on October 15th. Contact BookNook's customer service to inquire about the delay.
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