Strong response
Band 5.04.0/5 rubric- To
- manager@fitnessfirst.com
- Subject
- Concerns About New Treadmill Equipment
What worked
- Clear Purpose
- Polite Tone
- Request for Action
What cost points
- Lack of Specificity
- Awkward Phrasing
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Your local gym recently replaced several treadmills with new models. These new machines are difficult to use and often malfunction. You want to address this issue with the gym management.
Written to: customer-service
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
Across 80 scored practice attempts at the Reach120 practice prompt "Concerns About New Treadmill Equipment", the mean Reach120 practice band estimate is 4.0 of 6 (measured 2026-08-25; Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score).
Mean band estimate
4.0of 6
over 80 scored practice attempts
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
Source: Reach120 practice corpus, every scored attempt at this prompt, internal and harness-created accounts excluded through the same rule as public_measured_stats(). Attempts scored before 2026-03-23 are excluded: Reach120 changed how it scores on that date, and pooling across the change would describe the change rather than the writing. Recomputed when this page is rebuilt; the date above is when this reading was taken.
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